I deleted the draft due to the inability to preserve publishing rights, and I thnk those of you who have critiqued and commented.
Nov 04 2007
Nov 04 2007
I deleted the draft due to the inability to preserve publishing rights, and I thnk those of you who have critiqued and commented.
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Hope you’ll serve as eagle (or kestral) eyed editors and point out
misteaks, mistaques,boo boos.right after the ‘jump’, 1st para, 2nd line-shouldn’t it be ‘amiss’ rather than a miss?
“definitely the good china for these visitors and not the Styrofoam …” ?
Maybe add a link to part one for those who missed it?
Exciting story! Good work, easy to read.
And that’s good!