Admit One – NaNoWriMo Novel – part II

I deleted the draft due to the inability to preserve publishing rights, and I thnk those of you who have critiqued and commented.

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  1. Hope you’ll serve as eagle (or kestral) eyed editors and point out misteaks, mistaques, boo boos.

    • RiaD on November 4, 2007 at 21:51

    right after the ‘jump’, 1st para, 2nd line-shouldn’t it be ‘amiss’ rather than a miss?

    “definitely the good china for these visitors and not the Styrofoam …”  ?

    Maybe add a link to part one for those who missed it?

    Exciting story! Good work, easy to read.

    • Tigana on November 5, 2007 at 03:25

    And that’s good!

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