I’m new to this fine site…
I joined just a little over a week ago, and ever since I’ve wracked my brains on what to post as my first essay. There are so many good writers here and so many issues covered it’s tough for a noob to come up with something new.
In an effort to get my feet wet and to find out the ins and outs of publishing an essay, I photshopped together a somewhat inane pictorial (I won’t even call it an essay, because it wasn’t really) attempt to make people at least smile a little, and it poked fun at the “Balloon Boy” incident, although I turned it around to be about President Obama. After I published it I thought to myself, “That’s kinda dumb, maybe I shouldn’t have done it” but I left it up anyway, not even thinking it could offend anyone.
The next day I read your essay and you opened my eyes to a point of view that I hadn’t even considered. You see, I agree with you. Although I have never been involved with any of the fields of service that you discussed, my wife has. She has been an EMT and a police dispatcher in the past and I have to agree that your point of view is valid. After reading your post and also the link you supplied, I immediately deleted my essay and I ask that you excuse my noobistic enthusiasm. Thanks…
by: gotterdammerung @ Tue Oct 20, 2009 at 09:48:55 PDT
1) speak to your background
I’m ex-military, ex-bomb technician, ex-law enforcement, and a veteran. So, I have a few different areas of which I can speak knowledgeably. Think of all you’ve done, seen, and experienced. Then, apply those to the news articles you read.
2) speak with the passion you have
News “reports”. We rant, rave, and do the things journalists shouldn’t.
Let me illustrate for you…